Instead of saying Andaroos is a skilled skater, describe the friction of the wheels, the wind against their face, and the precision of their movements.
Weaknesses:
The reason Chapter 3 hits so hard is because you survived the tedious swamps of Chapter 2. The payoff—watching Kaelen finally speak his first word ("Andaroos") after 20 hours of silence—only works if you walked the long road. skatingjesus andaroos chronicles chapter 3 better
“Better,” whispered a voice. His own. Or not. Instead of saying Andaroos is a skilled skater,
Then, watch him figure it out.